Mike
There's some great work here - I especially like how you've taken theories and begun to try and unpick them and apply them for yourself - very well done indeed!
Your posts have been consistent in frequency and you have clearly kept up with the ethos of blogging. However, sometimes the purpose of your posts is unclear - the videos are lovely but why have you posted them? What are you thoughts? Reflections? What have you learned? gleaned?
You, like the others, need to make sure you link your blogs in the group to those in your individual blog - not the same posts but reflections, reactions and analyses of your other posts. For example, ifyou have posted in group, you could/should write up your personal reflection on this. If you've posted in individual what affect does this have on the grp? (and POST it!)
Your research posts are great but I'd like to hear more about your personal feeelings and responses to all this stuff.
Your response to teachers' feedback is excellent and an example to the others as is your linking of other websites and resources to your page.
Your navigational tools are working well and your blog is clear. i just wonder how 'Mike' it really is - could you add some pictures or interesting features that make your blog more individual?
On the whole, you've done a great job! I've referred many in the group to your blog so well done. Just remember to catch up on the details and keep it up!
Mrs T :-)
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